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LFox:
Quote from: rohina on 2007 December 18, 21:33:00
That would be "wife's".
Grammar Day 2007 - thank you for participating.
It's close enough, I didn't reread it 20 times like I usually do.
Quote from: littleimmysmom on 2007 December 18, 21:35:24
It seems that I have had a sim gossip to a spouse about their transgressions. This resulted in the spouse becoming angry. I will have to look and see, but I am pretty sure this has happened.
Well let me know what you find out. To get full effect on this stuff i'm sure you have to play with free will on. Which i of course never do.
Fairlight:
Quote from: LFox on 2007 December 18, 21:40:48
It's close enough, I didn't reread it 20 times like I usually do.
This should properly be a period or a semicolon, not a comma.
Quote from: LFox on 2007 December 18, 21:40:48
Well let me know what you find out. To get full effect on this stuff i'm sure you have to play with free will on. Which i of course never do.
You should have a comma between "Well" and "let". Also, when using "I" in the first person, it should always be capitalized.
Thank you for participating in Grammar Day!
Nailati:
Quote from: rohina on 2007 December 18, 21:33:00
Quote from: LFox on 2007 December 18, 21:07:12
Yeah real shame that. I remember a old video before sims 2 came out showing a guy cheating and his wifes sister seeing him. She then went over to tell the wife and the wife went and got pissed at her husband. They also cut the weather system before the game got released. Probably best to take anything about sims 3 with a grain of salt.
That would be "wife's".
Grammar Day 2007 - thank you for participating.
Not to mention missing commas, the use of the phrase "a old video," and lack of capitalization on the titles "Sims 2" and "Sims 3."
Happy Grammar Day!
LFox:
...yeah I don't think I'll stay on the forum any longer today.
Zazazu:
Quote from: LFox on 2007 December 18, 22:25:50
...yeah I don't think I'll stay on the forum any longer today.
Don't take it personally. It's Grammar Day! All posts are checked for grammar, and advice is given in a helpful tone instead of a snotty one.
As for truth in Sims advertising, I'm still waiting for my fire-breathing toddlers and women who rip their tops off and throw their men on the couch.
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